Government should be responsible for fundings and controlling scientific research rather than private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times development in science and technology have

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to measure the strength of any nation or any individual. In

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there is a school of thought who thinks that for any new developments government should provide money and keep an eye on progress

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of corporate companies. I agree

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some extent and I will shed my views in

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when government officials financially support

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any new projects they

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the rights for outcomes for any items or products that will prevent the monopoly in the economy by corporates because it will be in public.

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, if public officials

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any research regarding medicine or vaccine it will give them the copyrights of these products and eventually they can provide it to the public at

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cheaper price.

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, as I think when public officials keep an eye on

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projects they can monitor the progress of the development and they can know the outcomes of that and if

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of those experiments can harm

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environment

or public they can terminate the experiment without any hesitation.

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, research regarding arms and ammunitions etc.,

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if they can not abort the project they certainly can make some

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for utilizing them.

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, nuclear power.

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, these testings many time ends up in a disappointment as

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of each and

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of them is

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to predict.

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as, space exploration where billions of dollars get wasted and as public sectors funds them with the tax money of

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citizens which is

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sad. But if private

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will fund them and if it will go in vain it will not be

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earnings. Not but least

goverments

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many times in their budgets so, many times they cut down the expenses for research which directly hits the bump in the road of success. In

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government

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should allow private companies to provide monetary support for new findings. To conclude, I reiterate my opinion that public and

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sectors both should develop some kind of co-operative agreement that's how we will have plenty of money to put in experiments. And we will be strong and blessed with new and advanced technologies.