some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student's level. other people that they put Unnecessary pressure on young learners and tell us very little about their actual ability discuss both view and give your opinion.

The given topic is highly controversial.
However
, if a glance is taken at the pros and cons of
this
aspect , it is irrefutable to say that there are numerous advantages of
student
's give
exam
.
Therefore
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perceive that
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agree given the statement to support myself. Commencing with
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point in the list of my knowledge is that, if undergraduate 's give
exam
then
they can know about their
student
's ability .
However
, if they do not give an
exam
then
, they do not know where are stand as well as , in future time, people can face a lot of
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.
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Prime Minister,
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qualified
teacher and good experience Doctore and so on .
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to decrease interest in studying and
also
they decrease the
competetion
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competition
for education. For anomaly,
Last
year. In Covid-19 , that time all world lockdown
then
children did not go school. they took online classes and
also
they could not give
exam
physicals.So That time , undergraduate's education level decreased . they could not give interest in Studying . As well as , they forget everything.
However
, there is another school of thought according to which
firstly
, Nowadays, the education competition level rise day by day .
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, Children are taking more stress
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clear the competition. After that, they face mind related diseases. Apart from
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, schools are increasing more Subject for
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knowledge.
Nevertheless
, the main impact on
student
's they can not devote exams for all subjects.
Therefore
, they
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unnecessary
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. After Analyzing, the matter it would be right to say that despite a few disadvantages, many advantages after rank higher though. School's should not stop the
exam
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allowed according to the schooling level .
Consequently
,
student
's can give easily exams and they can become more interested in the study .
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