Some people feel that entertainers like film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money? Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
It has been always argued that some groups of people
such
as musicians or sports stars are better paid and and
they can make a decent living out of their job. I Remove the redundancy
apply
am agree
to some extent.
Needless to say, that some jobs involve dealing with a number of hardships and difficulties, which is intolerable for others, Change the verb form
agree
for example
, some sports stars who have devoted a lot of time and energy to their job in order to do their best are deserved to high payment. In addition
, some of them who participated in International matches and won the competition can bring honor
to the whole society, which is literally invaluable. Change the spelling
honour
Moreover
, some film stars like comedians are well_paid partly because of their acting
and Replace the word
actions
as a
result
their income has been boosted dramatically due to their popularity.
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,result
On the other hand
, there is a myriad of individuals who make lot
of money through their careers, Change the article
a lot
for example
, doctors in general, beauty surgeonsAdd the comma(s)
, in particular,
in particular
are likely to earn a great deal in short
time. Having said that, lawyers may gain a lot through a single contract and strike it rich Add an article
a short
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overnight
over night
. Another example is constructors Who built high raised Correct your spelling
overnight
building
might receive good benefits from their activities. Perhaps, if it were not for their certain ability, they would not be able to have Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
such
a lucrative job and high position.
In conclusion. I am inclined to agree that everyone who received a considerable salary are
deserved to, owing to their special talents. Indeed, their income Change the verb form
is
have
been defined by their unique knowledge and capability.Change the verb form
has
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