Some people feel that entertainers like film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money? Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

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as musicians or sports stars are better paid and

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they can make a decent living out of their job. I

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to some extent. Needless to say, that some jobs involve dealing with a number of hardships and difficulties, which is intolerable for others,

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, some sports stars who have devoted a lot of time and energy to their job in order to do their best are deserved to high payment.

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, some of them who participated in International matches and won the competition can bring

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to the whole society, which is literally invaluable.

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, some film stars like comedians are well_paid partly because of their

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their income has been boosted dramatically due to their popularity.

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, there is a myriad of individuals who make

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of money through their careers,

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, doctors in general, beauty surgeons

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are likely to earn a great deal in

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time. Having said that, lawyers may gain a lot through a single contract and strike it rich

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. Another example is constructors  Who built high raised

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might receive good benefits from their activities. Perhaps, if it were not for their certain ability, they would not be able to have

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a lucrative job and high position. In conclusion. I am inclined to agree that everyone who received a considerable salary

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deserved to, owing to their special talents. Indeed, their income

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been defined by their unique knowledge and capability.