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Nowadays because of our lifestyle and bad economic conditions people tend to working overtime, There are many people working harder than others in both school and the workplace. Some people believe that without labor, nothing prospers. But it is always a good thing?

#lifestyle #conditions #people #overtime #school #workplace #labor
A lot of students study for
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long hours because they want to compete for
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entrance exams
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, some of them
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 to pass and do well the exams just because of the promote in their job position. But some others are to be a workaholic. I personally believe that working too hard is detrimental
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 the routine life and society.
Disadvantages
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 of working hard are more than the advantages.
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, numerous studies have proven that working long hours without proper rest will reduce productivity and it takes
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 toll on your mental and physical health.
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 you can earn more money but in
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following
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this
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 I think you have to pay for your health. To sum up, there are so many people to fight harder in life
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 to their dreams come true and because of their goals.we have to care about our health and arrange the time.
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 it might bring serious problems and regrets in the future.
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