Some people think they it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas out side large urban centres.Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantage.

Certain individuals argue that manufactures and

factories

should be located away from the central business centres.

This

essay is going elaborate on some pros and cons of

industries

location.

To begin

with, the availability of

companies

and

industries

within the town centres provide a source of employment for the city dwellers

this

is because many people

are be

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able to secure job opportunities in the

factories

and earn a living.

Moreover

, the presence of

factories

promote the economic development of the given city to explain

this

, the exchange of products

that is

the raw materials and finished products will in turn improve

on

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the level of revenue collection within the city.

Additionaly

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Additionally

Additional

, Improved infrastructures will be experienced with the availability of

industries

thus

the ease of movement of goods and services.

For example

,a recent study shows that major towns developed faster owing to

availability

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of numerous

industries

.

Thus

, urban centres are able to improve in terms of economic development. In comparison, the challenges of

companies

and

industries

in the rural areas are

also

immenced

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immense

commenced

.

Firstly

,poor infrastructures

associated

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with regions for

this

reason the movement of goods and services will not be easy.

Secondly

, regions are not heavily populated

thus

having enough persons for certain activities is a challenge

thus

inhibiting the service provision.With

this

in mind,

companies

and

industries

will pollute the environment

subsequently

impairing the general health of the population.

For example

the lead poisoning in Owino Uhuru village in 1999.

Thus

,

presence

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of the

factories

in the rural creates major challenges to the habitats. To conclude,

companies

and

industries

are the major

source

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of employment and they promote

the

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economic development.

On the other hand

, their location should

well

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investigated so that it will not hinder the nearby residence.