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Many people believe that formal pen and paper examinations are not best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examination?

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Examinations are one of the most common methods of measuring learning in the education system throughout the world. At virtually every stage of the learning process,the testing scheme is used to verify that the learner is ready to move on to the
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 stage. After the period of learning, for measuring and assessing the performance of learners, some methods are needed. Examinations are the optimum approach to assessment. There are clearly certain advantages to
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 vitally crucial at any level of society and ensure a fair environment for all learners. They
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 force to improve skills who desire to get success.
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 and self-confidence. Whereas, failure leads to stress, illness and, distrust. There is a different method of examination
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 as multiple-choice, and essay. Despite the benefit of the examinations, the structure has always been argued. In one approach, regardless of the technique of
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 provide fairness among attendances.
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 do not have only able to assess an individual’s achievements. There should be more techniques for appraisal. Because learners have a variety of skills, one method cause unfairness. Whether
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 clearly have a role to play in ensuring proper, objective judgment of achievement.
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 need to be carefully designed and supplemented with other forms of appraisals if they are to be a truly useful component of the educational structure.
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