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Some feel governments, rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 outlined necessity of
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 medical system, certain thoughts were brought about, one of which is a belief that governments ought to be
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 for health care
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 of private companies. I strongly disagree with that perspective and in
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health
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 system is
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 each customer chooses what kind of
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 they want. To explain, a country where there is a free market for trading any
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, regardless
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 nature, tends to be more technologically developed.
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, once
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 pay for a
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, it usually comes with
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better quality and
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well-structured customer
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.
People
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 are free to choose what they are buying. It might vary from their needs, age, money and once
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 want. Another important argument that supports my view is that governments ought to occupy with others matters that any other citizen can do,
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’s living conditions are reasonable. It is to focus on order and law respect.
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, they can positively provide to any citizen an equal life condition. If they occupy with other regards
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complete medical assistance to everyone equally, they will overload themselves with certain responsibilities which could
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 to private companies. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the argument that governments need to provide medical assistance to citizens
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 of private enterprises. It is from private consumerism that all technological services are developed and with
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 system is not different.
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 that, each government must work to provide the same life standards to every
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,
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, they need to wisely select who is in real need of full support.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental human right
  • equitable access
  • government-run healthcare
  • economies of scale
  • negotiate
  • healthcare costs
  • profit motives
  • compromised healthcare
  • health inequities
  • accountable
  • public health objectives
  • reinvest
  • infrastructure
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