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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Migration these days has become a very common phenomenon, People are moving to a new nation for work-related purposes. It is a highly debatable topic that whether the children from immigrant households benefit from
this
 move or not. In
this
 essay, I’ll pen down both the views covering benefits and drawbacks followed by my own opinion. Those whose core argument revolves around the drawback of
this
 move, contend that numerous challenges may come in front of a
child
 to deal with. New language, different food, new school, new friends, culture change, weather conditions are some of the many challenges which a
child
 has to adapt immediately. A
child
 may take a long time to get familiar with.
This
 can ultimately bring discomfort which hinders the most pivotal aspect of a
child
’s life, his study at school. It may have a permanent effect on
child
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 personality, his or her level of confidence.
Nevertheless
, once the
child
 gets familiar with the new environment, there is a wide array of opportunities for
such
 kids. They become immune to
such
 challenges in their lives and can think beyond
it
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them
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. With
this
, they are more open to people from different races, colours, communities, languages.
This
 can engrave deeply in his psyche that individuals are different entities and are global citizens. Citizenship can not be territorial.
This
 may lead to a bias-free world. To sum up, despite
of
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the fact that moving from native land to a new nation may put many obstacles But all these obstacles are temporary which will not be there over a period of time. I strongly believe that they will be world-changing catalysts in formulating a perfect world in which racism, discrimination would cease to exist.
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