One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is argued that one of the big
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problem
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problems
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of
people
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that living in the capital is
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traffic
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a traffic
the traffic
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jam
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jams
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. Nowadays numerous
people
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have a dream to stay with
comfortable
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a comfortable
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life and many facilities in a big
city
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. Leading to
people
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prefer to stay in a large
city
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especially, in
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the inner-city
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inner-
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inner city
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city
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This
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essay will focus on discussion about causes of
traffic
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congestion
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and ways to solve
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traffic
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the traffic
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problem
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problems
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in a large
city
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.
To begin
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with causes of
traffic
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congestion
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.
Firstly
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,
location
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the location
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of
companies
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and
organizations
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is one of the most important
traffic
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problem
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problems
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. Numerous
companies
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and
organizations
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almost
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are almost
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located in inner-
city
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for more convenient
transportation
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.
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, jobs are usually in
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city
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the city
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lead to
densely
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population in there.
Population
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is the most important factor that directly
affect
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affects
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to
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apply
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the
transportation
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system
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both private and public transportations. Two big problems result in heavy
traffic
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congestion
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especially,
on
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during
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a
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apply
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rush hour. Many
people
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stuck
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are stuck
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in
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on
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the road at the same time because
the
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of the
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working hour that
start
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starts
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and
get
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gets
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off simultaneously.
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,
another
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factors are poor
transportation
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system
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and
high
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the high
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cost
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of
transportation
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that cause
of
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apply
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many
people
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choose
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to use private
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cars
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more than public
transportation
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. Another with suggestions about resolve
traffic
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problem
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.
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, the government should control the number of
companies
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and
organizations
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that
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apply
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located in the
city
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.
Companies
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and
organizations
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should move to
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the local
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area
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areas
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.
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, it not only decreases
traffic
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problem
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problems
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,
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but
also
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promotes
distribution
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the distribution
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of prosperity to the region.
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, the distribution of prosperity to
region
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the region
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can reduce
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problem
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problems
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and can
also
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distribute income into the rural.
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, if
countryside
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the countryside
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has higher work demand, workers will migrate to find jobs.
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, the government should produce and control
transportation
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system
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systems
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both
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for both
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qualitative service and price.
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, if
better
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a better
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transportation
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system
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, good service and low
transportation
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cost
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,
people
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will more consume public
transportation
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. In conclusion,
traffic
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jam is a big
problem
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that affects the quality of
people
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life in metropolis especially, on a rush hour. The main causes lead to
traffic
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congestion
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including
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a cluster
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cluster
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clusters
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of
companies
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, densely folks, poor public
transportation
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and pricey
transportation
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cost
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. Better ways to reduce
traffic
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congestion
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in a large
city
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include more distribution of
companies
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to
local
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the local
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area and improve about
transportation
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system
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and
cost
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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