One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
It is argued that one of the big
problem
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problems
people
that living in the capital is traffic
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a traffic
the traffic
jam
. Nowadays numerous Fix the agreement mistake
jams
people
have a dream to stay with comfortable
life and many facilities in a big Add an article
a comfortable
city
. Leading to people
prefer to stay in a large city
especially, in Correct article usage
the inner-city
inner-
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inner city
city
. This
essay will focus on discussion about causes of traffic
congestion
and ways to solve traffic
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the traffic
problem
in a large Fix the agreement mistake
problems
city
.
To begin
with causes of traffic
congestion
. Firstly
, location
of Correct article usage
the location
companies
and organizations
is one of the most important traffic
problem
. Numerous Change to a plural noun
problems
companies
and organizations
almost
located in inner-Add a missing verb
are almost
city
for more convenient transportation
. Secondly
, jobs are usually in city
lead to Add an article
the city
densely
population in there. Change the adverb
dense
Population
is the most important factor that directly Add an article
The population
affect
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affects
to
the Change preposition
apply
transportation
system
both private and public transportations. Two big problems result in heavy traffic
congestion
especially, on
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during
a
rush hour. Many Correct article usage
apply
people
stuck
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are stuck
in
the road at the same time because Change preposition
on
the
working hour that Change preposition
of the
start
and Change the verb form
starts
get
off simultaneously. Change the verb form
gets
Thirdly
, another
factors are poor Replace the adjective
other
transportation
system
and high
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the high
cost
of transportation
that cause of
many Change preposition
apply
people
choose
to use private Fix the infinitive
to choose
car
more than public Fix the agreement mistake
cars
transportation
.
Another with suggestions about resolve traffic
problem
. Firstly
, the government should control the number of companies
and organizations
that
located in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
. Companies
and organizations
should move to local
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the local
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
In addition
, it not only decreases traffic
problem
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problems
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
promotes distribution
of prosperity to the region. Correct article usage
the distribution
Besides
, the distribution of prosperity to region
can reduce Add an article
the region
traffic
problem
and can Fix the agreement mistake
problems
also
distribute income into the rural. Therefore
, if countryside
has higher work demand, workers will migrate to find jobs. Correct article usage
the countryside
Finally
, the government should produce and control transportation
system
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systems
both
qualitative service and price. Change preposition
for both
However
, if better
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a better
transportation
system
, good service and low transportation
cost
, people
will more consume public transportation
.
In conclusion, traffic
jam is a big problem
that affects the quality of people
life in metropolis especially, on a rush hour. The main causes lead to traffic
congestion
including Add an article
a cluster
the cluster
cluster
of Fix the agreement mistake
clusters
companies
, densely folks, poor public transportation
and pricey transportation
cost
. Better ways to reduce traffic
congestion
in a large city
include more distribution of companies
to local
area and improve about Add an article
the local
transportation
system
and cost
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