The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given column graphs illustrate the percentage of

boys

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and

girls

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the 14

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-16 year age group studying foreign

languages

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, and the top three foreign

languages

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opted by those children of an

English speaking

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country.

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girls

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than

boys

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studied foreign

languages

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, and French was the most popular out of the three given

languages

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50%

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girls

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of girls

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and 30%

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boys

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of boys

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studied foreign

languages

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in 1984.

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number fell among both genders and in 2007 40%

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girls

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of girls

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and approximately 25%

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boys

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of boys

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were studying foreign

languages

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. In 1994, French was the most popular language and was studied by 50%

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students

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of students

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. The percentage of

students

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studying French nearly halved and became about 25% by 2007.

German

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also

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lost popularity as the proportion of

students

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studying German fell from 20% to 15% over the given period.

Spanish

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was the least popular language in the given two years, but surprisingly it is the only language whose popularity grew over time. In 1984, 5%

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students

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studied

Spanish

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but 10% opted for

Spanish

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in 2007.

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, there were maximum

French

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number of French

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learners and the minimum

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Spanish

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number of Spanish

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learners in the given years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, languages, students, spanish with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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186 words

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The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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