The internet has transformed lives and economies bit it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Advent and invigoration of the internet
has
affected significantly Change the verb form
have
on
changes Change preposition
apply
of
lifestyles, economical developments and many others. Now that Change preposition
in
people
have communication accesses
at Fix the agreement mistake
access
anytime
and anywhere, it is universal to experience Replace the word
any time
same
Correct article usage
the same
trends
and cultures
throughout the world
. However
, there are concerns regarding what if the whole world
ends up sharing a single culture
. In my opinion, although
people
will enjoy and follow the same culture
, it is less likely to happen each and every person will think and act the same.
It is undeniable that there are less
boundaries between Change the quantifier
fewer
countries
owing to the fact that the internet has given people
the capacity of interacting other
sides of the Change preposition
with other
world
and share
their cultures
. Consequently
, people
can listen to the same music, wear the same style clothes
, Change preposition
of clothes
furthermore
celebrate and sorrow at the same events. That is
to say, people
share
the same culture
, however
, that is
the
new Change the article
a
culture
that golbally
shared, and it has nothing to do with mitigating Correct your spelling
globally
global
ethinic
Correct your spelling
ethnic
cultures
of each countries
. Change to a singular noun
country
For example
, people
enjoy international food time
to time, but that does not mean that Change preposition
from time
people
stop eating their own food.
Besides
it is true to some extent that people
think and behave similarly
, however
, that is
absolute excessive generazation
. In fact, there are many Correct your spelling
generation
generalization
people
, perhaps more than the number of people
who absorbed
other Add a missing verb
have absorbed
culture
and follow the Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
world
trends
, who lives in their home country and culture
for their lifetimes. Particularly, for non-English speaking countries
they have Add a comma
,countries
less
opportunities to experience other Change the quantifier
fewer
culture
as much as English speaking Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
countires
do. Correct your spelling
countries
Therefore
, it is too soon to say that the whole world
will have one culture
.
In conclusion, it seems plausible to worry about losing distictive
Correct your spelling
distinctive
cultures
of each countries
and Change to a singular noun
country
share
the same trends
all over the world
as it is already happening in some international cities or who are interested in global trends
. Yet there might be one same culture
that the world
share
together, there still be traditional cultures
remain to every countries
.Change to a singular noun
country
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