The internet has transformed lives and economies bit it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advent and invigoration of the internet
has
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affected significantly
on
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changes
of
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lifestyles, economical developments and many others. Now that
people
have communication
accesses
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at
anytime
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and anywhere, it is universal to experience
same
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the same
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trends
and
cultures
throughout the
world
.
However
, there are concerns regarding what if the whole
world
ends up sharing a single
culture
. In my opinion,
although
people
will enjoy and follow the same
culture
, it is less likely to happen each and every person will think and act the same. It is undeniable that there are
less
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boundaries between
countries
owing to the fact that the internet has given
people
the capacity of interacting
other
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with other
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sides of the
world
and
share
their
cultures
.
Consequently
,
people
can listen to the same music, wear the same style
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,
furthermore
celebrate and sorrow at the same events.
That is
to say,
people
share
the same
culture
,
however
,
that is
the
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new
culture
that
golbally
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globally
global
shared, and it has nothing to do with mitigating
ethinic
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ethnic
cultures
of each
countries
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country
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.
For example
,
people
enjoy international food
time
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from time
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to time, but that does not mean that
people
stop eating their own food.
Besides
it is true to some extent that
people
think and behave
similarly
,
however
,
that is
absolute excessive
generazation
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generation
generalization
. In fact, there are many
people
, perhaps more than the number of
people
who
absorbed
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other
culture
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cultures
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and follow the
world
trends
, who lives in their home country and
culture
for their lifetimes. Particularly, for non-English speaking
countries
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,countries
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they have
less
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fewer
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opportunities to experience other
culture
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cultures
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as much as English speaking
countires
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countries
do.
Therefore
, it is too soon to say that the whole
world
will have one
culture
. In conclusion, it seems plausible to worry about losing
distictive
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distinctive
cultures
of each
countries
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country
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and
share
the same
trends
all over the
world
as it is already happening in some international cities or who are interested in global
trends
. Yet there might be one same
culture
that the
world
share
together, there still be traditional
cultures
remain to every
countries
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country
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.
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