Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One question that has caused a lot of
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this
year is that
History
is one of the most important subjects in school. In my opinion,
although
subjects like
Science
and
Technology
are extremely important and necessary, I believe that
History
is equally important. On the one hand, we cannot be denied that thanks to
Science
and
Technology
, our lives are as modern and convenient as they are now. Researching
science
and
technology
in the school provides us with practical
knowledge
, promotes economic development, effectively serves in the fields of health care, manufacturing and education. In the past, when we lost money and time to acquire
knowledge
, now we have the Internet containing huge and diverse
knowledge
that we can easily learn.
On the other hand
,
history
also
helps us to know about our origins, helps us to know ourselves.
History
provides data on the emergence of national institutions, which are evidence of the existence of ancestors, helping us to understand ourselves, who we are, how humans formed, we How we were born, how to grow. The
knowledge
we have now is all thanks to recorded
history
.
Moreover
, we can learn more from the mistakes of our ancestors. In conclusion, I believe that both
science
and
technology
and
history
have had a great impact
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the development of our lives today. We need to study all three subjects because each subject has
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different importance in life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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