Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Modern day
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Modern-day
companies
often start the hiring process with a job application form and questionnaire which usually includes details of the applicants. Recently, we are able to see a rising trend of hiring parties asking for more personal information
. This
has sparked a debate whether this
is sensible and actually needed or whether it is a breach of privacy.
The pro information
would say that this
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these
questions
are used to enable companies
to further
filter candidates that do not suit the team’s work style. Businesses want to increase productivity and by matching like minded
team members together, Add a hyphen
like-minded
this
can be achieved. For example
, a book shop would benefit from an employee that has a hobby of reading. Thus
, they include such
a question in their application form. For this
reason, companies
that aim to boost Correct your spelling
teamwork
team work
would agree for Correct your spelling
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such
personal questions
to be asked.
However
, the anti information
would argue that it is a breach of privacy. Employees should not be judged by what they do and do not like to do. Work and office matters should be kept separate. For example
, the same bookshop might not hire someone with good sales experience because they are not an avid reader. As a result
, employees are finding it even more difficult to be employed.
My opinion on this
matter is that there must be an option to choose not to answer such
questions
. Companies
can still ask for additional personal information
but applicants are free to answer if they choose. For example
, if asked about how many books a person reads for a bookshop sales team position, the applicant should have the option to leave out such
questions
.
As
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In
conclusion
, personal Add an article
a conclusion
information
is useful to companies
however
some might find it overreaching into personal matters. I hope that companies
continue asking these questions
but with the option not to answer if wished.Submitted by poryamo on
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