Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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companies
often start the hiring process with a job application form and questionnaire which usually includes details of the applicants. Recently, we are able to see a rising trend of hiring parties asking for more personal
information
.
This
has sparked a debate whether
this
is sensible and actually needed or whether it is a breach of privacy. The pro
information
would say that
this
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questions
are used to enable
companies
to
further
filter candidates that do not suit the team’s work style. Businesses want to increase productivity and by matching
like minded
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team members together,
this
can be achieved.
For example
, a book shop would benefit from an employee that has a hobby of reading.
Thus
, they include
such
a question in their application form. For
this
reason,
companies
that aim to boost
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teamwork
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would agree for
such
personal
questions
to be asked.
However
, the anti
information
would argue that it is a breach of privacy. Employees should not be judged by what they do and do not like to do. Work and office matters should be kept separate.
For example
, the same bookshop might not hire someone with good sales experience because they are not an avid reader.
As a result
, employees are finding it even more difficult to be employed. My opinion on
this
matter is that there must be an option to choose not to answer
such
questions
.
Companies
can still ask for additional personal
information
but applicants are free to answer if they choose.
For example
, if asked about how many books a person reads for a bookshop sales team position, the applicant should have the option to leave out
such
questions
.
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conclusion
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, personal
information
is useful to
companies
however
some might find it overreaching into personal matters. I hope that
companies
continue asking these
questions
but with the option not to answer if wished.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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