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the number of free times per week that five genres of males and females was joyful between 1998 and 1999.The unit was measured by hours. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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The bar chart illustrates the number of free times per
week
 that five genres of males and females
was
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 joyful between 1998 and 1999.The unit was measured by
hours
. Overall, it is clear that women had more leisure
time
 than men per
week
. Both men and women in unemployed and retired status had the most
of
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free
times
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time
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.
However
, part-
time
 working and housewives showed only one sex data. In terms of the full-
time
 employed, men had slightly more leisure
time
 than women by approximately 10
hours
 per
week
.
Similarly
, both unemployed and retired enjoyed the most
hours
 of spare
time
.
Moreover
, the figures experience the same
hours
 of unemployed and retired of both genders, at around 85 and 78
hours
 of free
time
 per
week
, respectively. Housewives enjoyed nearly 50
hours
 of spare
time
 per
week
, a
slight
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 more than part-
time
 working who had just above 40
hours
 each
week
.
Furthermore
, it not has the information of males in these two categories.
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