Computer today can quickly and accurately languages . therefore, it is a save the time . To what extent do you agree or not ?

The given topic is highly controversial .
However
, If a glance is taken at the pons and cons of
this
aspect , it is irrefutable to say there are a lot of advantages if people are using a computer for learning new
languages
. So I perceive that I agree with the statements and I hereby give the following arguments to support myself . Commencing with a
first
and foremost point in the list of my knowledge is that today the life
an
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people have faster everyone wants to learn new
languages
. When
this
technology came
in
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into

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human life and they can learn easily new
skills
with the help of computers.
For instance
, In the past
time
, they could not get new
skills
because they had learned few
languages
and they were waste of
time
as compare to day life it is very fast so it saves
time
they can learn new
skills
anytime and anywhere and
also
one more benefits they do not need pay fees for learning new
skills
.
In addition
to
this
, if they learn new
languages
then
, they can not face any problems
such
as if they go to any other countries like Canada , Australia , India so on they can easily visit there and they can talk easily without any problems and they can understand their region .
Thus
, It is very useful for learning foreign
languages
with the help of computers.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of learning foreign
languages
with the help of new technology because they have learned only practical
skills
and they can not feel
this
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languagelanguages
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language languages

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.
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, In the past
time
, they were learning
a new
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new skills
a new skill

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skills
with help of books and they had taken classes and they could easily
languages
with cheap money as compare
computers
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because it is very expensive . Everyone can not buy it . So , it is use full book After analyzing the matter , it would be right to say that despite a few disadvantages, many advantages offer rank higher .
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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