Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
the
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wealth is a
vital
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essential part
in
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of
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human life. All items are purchased by the
wealth
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wealthy
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mainly,
electical
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electrical
devices, surgery,
groccery
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grocery
foods, etc. For
this
statement, I strongly
agrred
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agreed
agree
with
this
as
society
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assume to think about purchasing expensive products.
This
essay will include
a
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variable reasons and arguments with appropriate examples. The foremost argument is that middle people always need to think when they are going to shop
wealthy
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for wealthy
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mobile
phone
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phones
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.
Although
, not all
electical
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electrical
device
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devices
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are cheaped as others can afford.
For example
, all
apple
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devices are made for
bussiness
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business
person
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so, cheap people can not afford
it
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them
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.
Thus
, some
layman
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laymen
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think
twicely
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twice
to buy or order the lovable products from the shopping mall.
Howerer
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However
, it will not
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otherside
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other side
too, others believe that needless items can
purchased
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be purchased
purchase
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by
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directly. Add to
this
, as they
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think
thinked
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thought
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that if the older can spend their money anywhere as they want. For
instances
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, according to Media Z, the
porshe
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person never look
their
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financial statement, they just do buy a
lamborgini
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Lamborghini
Lamborgini
car.
Hence
, the choices for buying products never should be equalled. In conclusion, the crucial aspect of
the
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shopping is
a
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price and, it will consider that the product ought to buy or ignore. From my perspective, I would prefer to buy affordable and qualitative items as I need and want.
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