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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The climograph portrays the data about regular monthly
temperature
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 and rainfall during 12
months
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 in Kolkata city. Overall, it is clear that July has the highest
temperature
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 from other
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, while May is in
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 place in terms of precipitation.
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 with, in the
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 period of the year from January to April the
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 did not exceed more than 5 degrees. There is a sharp increase of 15 degrees between May and June and the
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 rises to its peak with more than 30 C in July.
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, in the
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 there is a falling trend. The
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 falls significantly from 36 C to 28 C between August and September.There is a quick decline to 2 С approximately in the
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 three
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.
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, the average rainfall has an upward trend and increases rapidly from 200 mm to 300 in the
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 3
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 and the highest precipitation of about 220 mm reaches in May. By contest, the number of rainfall starts to decline by 30 mm from June to August and after that, it stays stable
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 month. There is a gradual drop between 260 to 210 at the end of the period.
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