The tourist industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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has been considered as one of the most influential Industries for some time now. Some would prefer to look at the glass half-full, others mostly sit

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to it. In my opinion,

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and its problems, it

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provides countries with opportunities that are

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more beneficial. Every industry has its own negative impacts and

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is no exception. If we look closely, we can see how mass is

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around the world could affect countries in a negative way.

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, there is the issue with pollution. It has been estimated that more than 60% of aerial trips are for leisure. So it is safe to assume that they played a huge role in polluting the air, it's the negative environmental impacts.

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, in today's Global Village ethnic cultures and languages are subside. In another sense, they are being replaced by

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. It should not come as a shark if in a few years, all those unscathed locations that receive around the world, would diminish. On the bright side, the industry offers a lot of perks and benefits. Countries that do not have

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natural

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(name the oil, gold,

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.) Can definitely rely on

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and

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of income.

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way both the government and people can enjoy some

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monetary gains by attracting visitors to their country. The more prosperous the government

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more they can spend on infrastructure and green improvements.

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Society will experience a Better Living standard. In conclusion, I believe oil

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could prove detrimental in

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of ways,

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blessing for surpasses its

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