Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

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pure answer regard how true the statement is,
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the uncontrollable rush hour upon roads.
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the Government deal with
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required to control it, Because it appears with multiple factors to become one of the
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that cant stop
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tragedy circumstances among car ownerships for not being organized
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factor called 'Over Population'
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vehicles
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into
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busy roads.
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to control and
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places to be well structured.
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what I mentioned above there are ways to provide
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elements
to the public, to allow The Authority to minimize the
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effectiveness
of the rush roads that we are dealing with
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by
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distributing
helpful
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commercials
to
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acknowledge
them with a clear letter to the public of how or when to
use
their vehicles, especially in the public areas. Motivate them to
use
another type of transportations to prevent green from any type of pollutions and to reduce traffic rush for
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instance
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furthermore
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required the right time and day to unleash
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. To sum up, It is difficult to
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together and support each other it is ten times better to manage it.
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