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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

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impact
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pure answer regard how true the statement is,
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the uncontrollable rush hour upon roads.
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the Government deal with
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First
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 that cant stop
such
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emergency
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tragedy circumstances among car ownerships for not being organized
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 to lack of how to
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uncontrollable
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 factor called 'Over Population'
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vehicles
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into
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busy roads.
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 to control and
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However
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 what I mentioned above there are ways to provide
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discipline
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elements
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effectiveness
 of the rush roads that we are dealing with
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. For
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; The government should essense
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distributing
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commericals
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commercials
 to
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acknowledge
 them with a clear letter to the public of how or when to
use
 their vehicles, especially in the public areas. Motivate them to
use
 another type of transportations to prevent green from any type of pollutions and to reduce traffic rush for
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instance
; dealing with Trains,
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Election
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scooters
, Bicycles, public bus transportation
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 addition, using
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.
furthermore
, These measurements will transition the situation into positive
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results
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required the right time and day to unleash
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. To sum up, It is difficult to
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eliminate
this
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together and support each other it is ten times better to manage it.
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