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In general,
skin
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whitening
products
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are famous across the globe and provides huge revenue for the manufacturing companies selling
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products
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.
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essay describes the reasons why these
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are popular and what are the bad effects on the health of the people. To start with,
skin
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whitening
products
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are widely used by
peoples
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to look fair and attractive.
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is considering the fact that quite often more importance is given to external appearance as compared with inner beauty and sole.
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, big brand
products
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are blindly purchased by people, since those are advertised by famous celebrities and are getting purchased without any
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thought.
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, there are many bad effects of using
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whitening
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on the health of
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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applying
thick
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layer of
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skin
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whitening product makes
skin
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oily and
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oily
skin
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give rise to pimples and other reactions on the
skin
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. Some of the
skin
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whitening
products
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permanently damage the
skin
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tone and makes black spots on
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skin
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the skin
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.
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,
such
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products
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don’t have any proven evidence of whitening
skin
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.
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, fair and lovely is
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a popular
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brand in India
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is purchased by
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number of
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population and applied in daily use on
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the face
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.
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, there is no visible whitening observed on anybody’s face as on date after applying
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product for years together. In summary,
skin
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whitening
products
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are used to have the superiority complex
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others.
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, proper attention to be given to
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awareness among the people due to various known health effects and
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products
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shall be avoided as much as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • emissions
  • industrial waste
  • respiratory diseases
  • cardiovascular issues
  • waterborne diseases
  • ecosystems
  • regulations
  • biodiversity
  • public transportation
  • renewable energy
  • waste management
  • fossil fuels
  • public awareness
  • healthcare costs
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