Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. And

that is

because of various reasons but mostly for the reason that when tourists visit a country they show defiance towards

that nations customs and traditions

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the customs and traditions of that nation

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and promote their own western cultures which

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bad effects on the mindset of that nation's population. In

this

essay, I will discuss the perspectives of people as to why they consider foreign travel a bad thing and

also

the solution that can change their views. In my opinion, I believe international tourism is important for a state.

To begin

with, there are reasons that caused many folks to consider

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travel as a bad thing for their country.

Firstly

, travellers

promoting

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their

western

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customs and

causing

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folks of that state to

also

follow those cultures. Resulting in, their own heritages

to disappear

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in the process.

Secondly

, these globetrotters act defiant towards rules and regulations in entering a sacrilegious place.

For instance

,

while

entering a holy place one needs to take off shoes,

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their

heads

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and

bodies

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properly but these backpackers do not seem to care about those rules. And

lastly

, they cause pollution by throwing plastic bottles and bags everywhere.

On the contrary

, foreign travellers are important for a nation as

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provides

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us

an

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opportunity to learn about

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western customs and broaden our horizons.

Therefore

, the perspective needs to change and that can be done with some aid from the government.

For example

, the government can issue laws like

while

going inside a sacred place everyone needs to follow rules and whoever

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not must pay a heavy fine.

Consequently

, fines for causing pollution and placing more trash cans around the city.

To conclude

, like the two sides of a

coin

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there are both advantages and disadvantages to a certain thing. To enjoy the benefits we must find ways to change the downfalls into advantages. As mentioned earlier in

this

essay, I hold the view that foreign globetrotters are important for the bright opportunities that

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along with

them.