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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?

In the era of globalisation, every
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 feels pressure to produce different material objects for sustaining their stable economic growth with a standard lifestyle. It is believed by some
people
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 that each
country
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 should focus on producing more elements and goods. In my opinion,
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 it has some drawbacks, I agree with the viewpoint. Though it is really difficult sometimes to manage material
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, producing good
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 will be helpful for the
people
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. On one hand, material goods are needed for communities in every
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 for their living purposes and economic growth. As the population are increasing gradually, they require shelter, food, clothes, and so on.
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, in Bangladesh, the Government has started to produce more electricity as it is badly needed in the industrial sectors as well as for the
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 well being. Again, some developing countries are influenced by developed societies for growing their GDP over the year which resulted in more elements need to export to other nations.
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, Bangladesh needs to produce more clothes to export to other
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 for achieving foreign currency.
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, manufacturing materials and good
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 are required for the population and countries economies.
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, failing to manage the
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 disposal of the industry will be harmful to both the environment and
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's health. To give an example, in Bangladesh, the authorities are always facing trouble managing
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that is
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 produced from different industrial sectors. The
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 as CO2, Nitrogen, and varieties of toxic chemicals are disposed to the river which resulted in water pollution.
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, the air
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 has been polluted by these different types of toxic substances which might be the cause of disease to the individuals.
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, it will be harmful to both environment and
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's health. To conclude, though producing good
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 are necessary for each
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, careful consideration must need to be taken for managing
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 disposal. It is recommended to produce material
things
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 and goods by considering the safety issues in both environment and health.

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