During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to express my interest in a possible

job

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opportunity that we discussed.

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, I am Shreya and we meet on a Bangalore-Delhi flight, on 10th August 2020. I was sitting on your adjacent seat and had a detailed

discussion

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regarding food habits in India.

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, in the course of the

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discussion

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you mentioned I reach out to you if I am interested to join your organization.Currently, I am now looking out for a

job

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change.

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, I thought of reaching out to you. Recently, I saw a

job

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posting on Linkedin for the position of " HR manager" with your company, and I am interested to apply for that.

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, I believe that I will be a perfect fit for

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job

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as I am having an enriching experience of 10 years working in the hospitality domain.

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, I know numerous industry well-known head chefs/ Sous Chefs.

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, it will facilitate the growth of your business globally as well as generate more revenue. In our

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, I figured out that you are planning to expand your business for the healthy food segment. I could be your biggest asset in hiring people for

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new venture as I am

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possessing exposure to that. We can have a detailed

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once we meet. My email id is [email protected] and my contact number is 34567234. I look forwards to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

244 words

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