Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There have always been some people who
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that some problems, which
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to traffic and pollution can be tackled by increasing the petrol
pricis
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prices
, which I reckon there are more influential steps to solve these issues. In the forthcoming
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I shall explain.
Although
it lends itself to a lot of
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, I believe that
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pressures
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can be imposed on the whole society by raising the fuel prices.
First
, can
rise
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inflation rates dramatically, and
as a result
of
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may have a negative effect on the whole,
for instance
, if the transportation fees increased, it would have
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impact on the other parts of the society.
In addition
, because of the fact that nowadays a vast number of individuals have to commute to work to far-flung places, where there
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no access suitable transport
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it is likely to cost them a fortune to do their tasks.
However
, there are some other measures that can be taken to ease
this
trouble,
for example
, the government should be required to create better awareness in the community by preparing more programs for motivating the people to use public facilities rather than private
cars
Moreover
, through persuading factories to change their approaches towards using solar-powered and renewable energies
instead
of fossil resources.
Similarly
, by producing more electronic
cars
and providing folks with some incentives in order to talk them into purchasing more these kinds of
cars
. In conclusion,
although
it seems to be easy to solve the traffic congestion and air pollution problems by increasing the petrol's price, from my standpoint, it just may exacerbate the circumstances, and the remedy can be other steps
such
as enhancing people's awareness, taking advantage of other resources, and changing the
cars
' types.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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