Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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that some problems, which

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to traffic and pollution can be tackled by increasing the petrol

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prices

, which I reckon there are more influential steps to solve these issues. In the forthcoming

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, I believe that

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pressures

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can be imposed on the whole society by raising the fuel prices.

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, can

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inflation rates dramatically, and

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may have a negative effect on the whole,

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, if the transportation fees increased, it would have

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impact on the other parts of the society.

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, because of the fact that nowadays a vast number of individuals have to commute to work to far-flung places, where there

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no access suitable transport

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it is likely to cost them a fortune to do their tasks.

However

, there are some other measures that can be taken to ease

this

trouble,

for example

, the government should be required to create better awareness in the community by preparing more programs for motivating the people to use public facilities rather than private

cars

. 

Moreover

, through persuading factories to change their approaches towards using solar-powered and renewable energies

instead

of fossil resources.

Similarly

, by producing more electronic

cars

and providing folks with some incentives in order to talk them into purchasing more these kinds of

cars

. In conclusion,

although

it seems to be easy to solve the traffic congestion and air pollution problems by increasing the petrol's price, from my standpoint, it just may exacerbate the circumstances, and the remedy can be other steps

such

as enhancing people's awareness, taking advantage of other resources, and changing the

cars

' types.