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Languages are dying out all the time. The result of this is a world with fewer languages. This is a good thing for people everywhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are thousands of
languages
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 in the
world
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 today. Some of them are strong
languages
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 spoken by many millions of
people
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, while others are spoken by smaller groups of
people
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, sometimes numbering in the hundreds. As
languages
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 die, benefits accrue to human society, but
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 drawbacks. It is certainly not advantageous for everybody everywhere. From a practical point of view, having fewer
languages
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 can lead to greater ease of communication.
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 is because when
people
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 share a
language
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,
then
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 information and ideas can flow more easily, which is of utmost importance in a globalised
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.
In addition
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, there is an economic advantage, or economies of scale, since information can be presented in written form in greater bulk, meaning there is no need for translations, which can be costly.
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, internationally, the flow of ideas and information is facilitated through the common
language
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. There is another side, though.
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 of all, those who have lost a
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 have
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 lost
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culture, a
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 of expressing themselves, and a
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 of understanding the
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 and their experience of the
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. They will never be able to express themselves fully in their new
language
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.
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, the quality of communication in the common
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 is limited. The reason for
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 is that
people
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 are writing and reading in an acquired
language
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, not the mother tongue.
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,
this
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 acquired
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 may simply be unable to express some of the culturally bound ideas of the non-native speaker. In brief,
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,
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 death is a tragedy. Those whose
language
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 todies lose part of their identity, and a
way
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 to give expression to their deep thoughts and feelings. For the rest of the
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, there is a loss of diversity. Along with the
language
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, a whole culture and
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 of expressing
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 culture die. Things of deep human value that could be expressed before are now silenced.

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