In the future, the main reasons for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is an irrefutable fact that shopping online has become increasingly popular these days. In

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regard, there is a possibility that online shopping would lead to the closure of brick and mortar

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in cities and towns in the future.

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happening.

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with, the vital reason for the closure of physical

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in future is that consumers are quite satisfied with the unique shopping experience provided by online sites.

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is because they have wide varieties of shopping options to choose from coupled with fast and reliable delivery channels which makes most of the customers prefer

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sites over traditional

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.

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, recently, in

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many renowned

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had to shut down because of the change in

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the shopping

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preferences of customers.

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, given the fact that

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companies

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have entered into almost every sector, there is a high possibility that retail

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will eventually perish. Another compelling reason that the

e-commerce

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giants will succeed over retail shops is that they have

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capital base and lower overhead

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. These

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have

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net worth to afford substantial marketing

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to penetrate the market despite the competition from the

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.

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, Amazon has launched

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of drones for initiating faster delivery which would decrease the manpower cost dramatically.

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,

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these

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incur huge capital expenditure, the income generated over a period of time is multifold which makes them market leaders and

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lead to the elimination of the traditional

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. In conclusion, it can be anticipated

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that e-commerce company

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e-commerce

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companies

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will acquire the entire market share in the future because they provide exceptional client service and are efficiently able to reduce the overhead expenditure.