It is a widely held belief that leaders are born. On the other hand, people believe that leadership can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#belief #leaders #hand #people #leadership

Genes pre-birth design our influential traits, I do not believe that these can not be cultured post-birth, in fact, 'great leaders are made, not born' is a widely accepted statement in the whole world, after we got 2/3rd head who attained effective administrative qualities from

this

world after they were born.

Firstly

, we will discuss how these attributes can be achieved, during the whole journey,

secondly

, will explain how pre-assumed born ruler could easily get converted into dictators.

To begin

with, since childhood, teenagers start developing these skills, say, a book-worm monitor often guided by a teacher to effectively handle the class in his absence is a part of mastering these skills. in corporates, regular leadership sessions being arranged by the CEO's to convert bosses into chief, indeed, these are effective. To illustrate, Shobendu was labelled as my 'team leader' in TCS, whereas, he was chief only because he never listened to our submissions, but after the leadership lectures of Sandeep Maheshwari, his opinion got totally changed,

further

, he started considering our advice in all the core areas.

Thus

, ace leading quality can certainly be developed at every stage of life.

On the other hand

, few blessed infants, with little extra qualities are considered to be god-gifted plus societies blindly start following them, which in turn, after attaining the majority, misutilize their powers, which becomes a dreadful situation for the whole region.

For example

, Shankar Singh was considered to be the lord's successor, as he uttered 'god' as his

first

word, but from his 20's, he started a movement to separate his state from the nation, and

then

it ended with violence and his death.

Therefore

, genetically superior can not guarantee sure shot leadership, rather than, can sometimes lead to rulership. To recapitulate, in a mother's womb, chromosomes only define our body structure, whereas, positive authoritative qualities, we can only accomplish from the outside world only.

Submitted by jatinkochar1993 on Tue Aug 24 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

316 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
Some people feel that we should protect all wild animals. Other people think that only some wild animals should be protected. Discuss both points of view and give your opinon.
Protecting wild animals is a debated topic, with some advocating for the preservation of all species while others suggest a more selective approach. I believe a balanced strategy is necessary with protecting a few of them.
7
band
There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.
I am writing in order to lodge about the changing rooms in your sports centre.
4.5
band
You and your family have Just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter, - give details of the things that were unsatisfactory - explain the reactions of the members of your family - ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation
I am writing in order to complain about apartment. My family are hating that apartment. Because apartment is very noisy and dirty. It has not got comfort.
6.5
band
some people say government should provide transportation for children who go to school, but some say that it is the responsibilities of parents? discuss both views and give your own views.
Free transport vehicles for school children have become a gripping desire by parents. While a number of individuals argue that the act should be done by the government, other people in society think that it relies on parents.
5.5
band
You visit a sports centre regularly, and there is a problem with the changing rooms in it. You have complained about it several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter, describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last time you complained explain what you want the manager to do
I am writing this letter with context to the faulty water heating system of the men's changing room. The sports centre members had raised the issue several times in past also, but there was no satisfactory solution of the problem has been done yet.

It is a widely held belief that leaders are born. On the other hand, people believe that leadership can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people feel that we should protect all wild animals. Other people think that only some wild animals should be protected. Discuss both points of view and give your opinon.

some people say government should provide transportation for children who go to school, but some say that it is the responsibilities of parents? discuss both views and give your own views.