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Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter in reference to inquire about the loss of
documents
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 that I believe have forgotten in your hotel while attending a meeting recently. The moment I reached home I realized my papers are missing. I clearly remember picking up the certificates from the reception desk while I was directed towards the restaurant. In the
restaurant
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 I was seated in the non-smoking area
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 to the buffet counter. It was a table for four. These records are important for my immigration to the USA. It contains my educational transcripts and my visa details. Without these ,
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 I would not be able to continue my procedure
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. Requesting you to check with the security department, if they have received any
documents
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. In case they have them, hand them over to the receptionist. You can reply to my email mentioning that
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 have been given to the concierge. Please, do not forget to add high important option in the email so that I do not miss it. Yours sincerely, Amina Zafar

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my interest in the [Position] advertised in [Newspaper].
  • I have [number] years of experience in [Your Field/Industry].
  • In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Key Responsibilities].
  • I successfully [Achievement or Project], which resulted in [Result/Impact].
  • I am particularly attracted to [Company Name] because of [Reason].
  • I believe my skills in [Key Skill] and [Another Skill] align well with the requirements of the job.
  • My ability to [Relevant Skill or Experience] would make a valuable addition to your team.
  • I am eager to contribute to [Company Name]’s success by [How You Can Contribute].
  • Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
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