International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travellers cause greater than the advantages they bring?

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world, communities are asked to work much more than before which includes have more exceptional holidays. Indeed, nowadays international tourism has become a huge industry in the world because people want to go

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and have more incredible experiences

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behaviour led to so many issues.

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essay intends to outline if benefits are greater than drawbacks in

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case.

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, being able to travel everywhere is

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a powerful feeling and everyone has understood

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, in the global mind of our society, as employees are working all week long, they deserve to have some holidays on the other side of the world.

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occidental thought may

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to some disasters.

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, many islands have seen their worldlife destructed in

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to build some accommodation facilities for tourists. Inhabitants

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pushed in

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to put some huge hotel

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of their houses.

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was done in

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that travellers will be able to take a rest after 12 hours inside a plane.

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, all these arguments are without counting the sizable problems with all the pollution it creates.

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, each worker of the society can enjoy delightful vacations in different countries extremely far away from Europe

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as Indonesia or India...

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, many inhabitants have changed their work in

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to sell things for strangers or to propose

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activities.

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, some islands are today living only thanks to

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tourist money whereas others are independents. To conclude, the consequences of

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mass tourism are

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worldlife

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wildlife

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of real citizens even if

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behaviour might have

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outcome as raising a large amount of money, the balance is

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tricky to find. I believe that the issues that

inernational

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international

travellers cause are greater than the

advanges

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advantages

they bring. We can hope that

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activities tend to decrease in the future...

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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travellers cause greater than the advantages they bring?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Your next door neighbor likes to listen music late at night because of the loud music you often loose you sleep. Write a letter to the building manager.

Some people say that now we can see the films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.