nowadays people waste a lot of food that was brought from restaurants and shops.why do you think people waste food?what can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
A section of
people
states that more number of fitness facilities
should be installed to improve peoples health
. but others deny this
point and says that sports facilities
doesn't
give much impact to improve Change the verb form
don't
health
and they suggests
that new ways Change the verb form
suggest
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should
This
essay agrees that there should be some other precautions should be required for health
improvement.
On the one hand, it says that public health
can be increased by opening several activity centures
and yoga classes. Nowadays Correct your spelling
centuries
centres
people
are becoming more and more lazy
to perform their daily day works, Replace the words
lazier and lazier
lazier
This
leads to decrease in their health
and fitness levels. To stop this
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people
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be encouraged to actively participate in some programs, which makes improvement in their Correct your spelling
should
health
, For example
, people
in western countries are very busy in
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on
thier
weekdays, but when they get to Correct your spelling
their
the
weekend
all of them practice some games or workouts with other fellow mates, which gives them mobility to Add an article
the weekend
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for Correct your spelling
work
next
week.
On the other hand
, some people
states
that the activities contribution is very limited to their Change the verb form
state
health
and they need some more actions to solve this
. Though weekend exercises benefit at that instant, but
in a long Remove the conjunction
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this
cannot help them to get full energy. Another point is that more than physical activities, peoples food habits should change and they should follow some strict diet plans to be healthy. For examples
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example
facilities
, the government should implement some helpful methods that people
can easly
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easily
folow
to stay energetic.
In conclusion, though there are many benefits in increasing of sports Correct your spelling
follow
facilities
, some people
says
those are not enough, they suggest that eating habits of Change the verb form
say
people
should change to come out of these problems. However
, I believe that with
regular Change preposition
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excersies
and proper food habits can give ultimate benefits to Correct your spelling
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