Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

Learning
English
at school is became obvious in our thought. Indeed,
English
is the international
language
,
then
it is very useful to speak
this
,
otherwise
,
this
subject is often seen
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important than learning local languages which
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, in my point of view, a little be excessive.
This
essay intends to provide arguments for learning
english
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without
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our own
language
.
Firstly
, as almost everyone in the world
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speaking
english
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, learning
this
subject at school is crucial. Indeed, being able to speak
this
fluently may open many doors and enable different
possiblities
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possibilities
.
For instance
, an
undergarduate
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undergraduate
student who would like to do a degree or go to
the
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university in an
English
country must know how to speak, read, listen and write properly.
Nonetheless
, some people want to stay in their own country all their lives which makes
english
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skill
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useless.
On the other hand
, being able to speak his own
language
is the most essential thing to know because it is a part of our history and our background. I believe that it is
also
extremely fascinating to know how our own
language
walk. How every word was built and
beeing
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being
able to master every tiny detail during a speech is joyful.
For instance
, you can go through more abstract
concept
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if you really know the sense of words.
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children need to know their
language
, in order to be able to be understood clearly. To conclude, I think that, developing the skills of students are important but not
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practising his own
language
.
However
, I believe that we tend to live in an
english
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world.
Then
this
is why we need to master both languages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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