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Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

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In most cases,
people
 tend to direct others as successful individuals once they have
a
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plenty of money. In my take of ,
view
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 I do not think
wealth
 can be used as a measurement of
succeed
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.
However
, there are a variety of merits that can be used to know whether a person
successful
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 or not
such
 as good
relation
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 with relatives along with the level of education that a person has.
To begin
 with, it is an incorrect way to judge
people
 based on their
wealth
. Many
people
 are far too numerous to mention, have a huge
wealth
 but they struggling in many parts
in
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 their
life
such
 as a
health
 condition and failed relations. To illustrate, rich men are always focusing on their businesses rather than their
health
 or families which is resulting in difficulties throughout their
life
.
Hence
, neither a huge bank account nor luxury detail surrounding your
life
 can be a fair measure of
success
. In terms of the right way of measuring a successful individual, having a good family with lovely kids is the most important measure of
success
. I believe that
success
 is when you reach
at
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the
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retired
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 age with a strong circle of families and friends who stand with you
in
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 the rest of your
life
. Another factor to consider is body
health
 in general. being rich without
a
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physical
health
 is not successful at all while having good
health
 with little money is a sign that means that a person almost
achieve
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 his goals in
lifetime
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. In conclusion, good relations with family and friends could be a perfect method to measure whether
people
 succeed or not .
However
, taking
wealth
 as a measurement of
success
 is incorrect way.
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