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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinión

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The given line graphs provide information about the
amount
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 of various food products consumed by the population of Germany between the years 1945 to 2010. Overall, it can be depicted from the graphs that the products which were highly consumed were,
milk
 and cream and fresh vegetables
except
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 potatoes, and the least consumed were skimmed
milk
 and fruit juice. As can be illustrated from the
first
 graph,
identical
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 trend was observed in the initial years in the usage of
milk
 and cream and liquid whole
milk
, but after the
year
1980
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 the former declined gradually to 2 litres and the latter plummeted to half litres, in the same
year
 people started to consume skimmed
milk
.
Furthermore
,
fluctuating
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 trend was observed in the consumption of fresh vegetables it was just above 800
grams
 in the
first
year
 which decreased to just below 800
grams
 in the
last
year
.
However
,
increasing
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 trend was seen in
consumption
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 of fresh fruit and fruit juice, individuals consumed former from starting which was 200
grams
 and increased to 800
grams
 in
last
year
, while the latter was consumed from the
year
 1955.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acceptance
  • contentment
  • resilience
  • complacency
  • personal growth
  • societal progress
  • motivating
  • circumstances
  • growth mindset
  • innovation
  • persistent
  • frustration
  • dissatisfaction
  • realistic expectations
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