Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted.

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number

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, it makes the government

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build some public infrastructures to provide public

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that it is impactful to life quality.

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, it gives some negative impacts

to

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the environment that it becomes more crowded and polluted.

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of

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these problems that there are a big

number

of housing

block

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and parking

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. Even though, the government can tackle these issues by making

regulation

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of having housing and

vehicles

. It can be seen that a huge population

is happened

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in some big cities and it needs to build many public facilities to support people

life

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.

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,

house

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is a premier needed that absolutely people will have for their living but it makes us

to

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change some green

area

which is become a housing

block

and makes more crowded.

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, having

vehicles

more

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than one unit encourages us to provide

parking

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area

for a lot of cars or motorcycles so that it changes our fresh air to become polluted. It is clear that housing

block

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blocks

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and parking

area

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give negative effects

to

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life quality. To solve these cases,

government

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the government

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can make two main regulations of living in

apartment

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an apartment

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block

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blocks

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and having

private

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a private

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vehicle

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. Picture as, if

ministry

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the ministry

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of citizenship makes a rule to urban to live in

apartment

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an apartment

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it can decrease the

number

of housing blocks.

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, it can impact

to

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the regulation of having

vehicles

that in an apartment building only provides two blocks of

parking

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the parking

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area

so it can decrease the

number

of cars and

motorcycle

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. In the end, the problems of crowding and polluting can be solved by decreasing the

number

of housing

block

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blocks

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and having

vehicles

.