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In many countries, children show less respect to elders. What are the causes of such behavior? What can be done to address this situation?

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Nowadays, people are living in a society that
don'
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doesn't
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t
 recognize the
importance
 of
values
. One of the main
values
 whose lack is more visible around the world is
the
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Respect
. It is actually a sad
situation
 because
the
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respect
 is the basis of
the
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freedom
, if we don'
t
respect
 each other, we will cross the line between their
freedom
 and ours.
On the other hand
, analyzing
familiy's
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family's
 structure can be
obsererved
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observed
 that
this
behavior
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behaviour
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 in children is
consequence
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a consequence
the consequence
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 of the
behavior
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behaviour
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 of their
parents
.
First
, the lack of
values
 that we are living in the actual world, is a consequence of the greater
importance
 that we are giving to
the
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freedom
.
Although
the
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freedom
 is an
importan
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important
 value, we can'
t
 give more
importance
 than we give to the rest of
values
,
such
 as
respect
 or
emphaty
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empathy
. It is
this
 relevance that we have
gave
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given
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 to the
freedom
what
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that
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 had
became
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become
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 the world in a place
whitout
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without
values
. Thereby we find children on the street who don'
t
respect
 anybody, and they think that can do whatever they want,
whitout
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without
 consequences.
Second
, when we analyze the family's
behavior
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behaviour
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, we found that even there is no
respect
 between fathers and sons, so what can we expect from the son toward their grandparents if they always look
their
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at their
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parents
 acting
whitout
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without
respect
 toward their own
parents
. The example is the principal way to learn
values
,
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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 learn by repeating
ours
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our
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behaviors
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behaviours
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.
For example
, if my son looks at me, always
anger
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 and impatient when I come back home, they will repeat
this
behavior
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behaviour
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 when they arrive from their school. To conclude, giving a look
to
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at
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 the general
situation
, can be seen that if we reinforce the
importance
 of
the others
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the values of the other
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values
 we can address
this
situation
. Incorporating subjects in
schooll
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school
 since early years we can give to the kids the knowledge that they need to turn in a good way
this
situation
.
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In
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home
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the home
a home
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,
parents
 must escape from their routines and get time to share with their sons and teaching the
values
 as
behaviors
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behaviours
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 that
complements
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 each other.
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