In many countries, children show less respect to elders. What are the causes of such behavior? What can be done to address this situation?

Nowadays, people are living in a society that
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t
recognize the
importance
of
values
. One of the main
values
whose lack is more visible around the world is
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Respect
. It is actually a sad
situation
because
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respect
is the basis of
the
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freedom
, if we don'
t
respect
each other, we will cross the line between their
freedom
and ours.
On the other hand
, analyzing
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family's
structure can be
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observed
that
this
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behaviour
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in children is
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a consequence
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of the
behavior
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behaviour
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of their
parents
.
First
, the lack of
values
that we are living in the actual world, is a consequence of the greater
importance
that we are giving to
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freedom
.
Although
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freedom
is an
importan
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important
value, we can'
t
give more
importance
than we give to the rest of
values
,
such
as
respect
or
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empathy
. It is
this
relevance that we have
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given
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to the
freedom
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had
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the world in a place
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without
values
. Thereby we find children on the street who don'
t
respect
anybody, and they think that can do whatever they want,
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without
consequences.
Second
, when we analyze the family's
behavior
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behaviour
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, we found that even there is no
respect
between fathers and sons, so what can we expect from the son toward their grandparents if they always look
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parents
acting
whitout
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without
respect
toward their own
parents
. The example is the principal way to learn
values
,
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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learn by repeating
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behaviors
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.
For example
, if my son looks at me, always
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and impatient when I come back home, they will repeat
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behaviour
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when they arrive from their school. To conclude, giving a look
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the general
situation
, can be seen that if we reinforce the
importance
of
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the values of the other
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values
we can address
this
situation
. Incorporating subjects in
schooll
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school
since early years we can give to the kids the knowledge that they need to turn in a good way
this
situation
.
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home
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the home
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,
parents
must escape from their routines and get time to share with their sons and teaching the
values
as
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that
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each other.
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