Nowadays more and more children are being brought up in single parent families. what is the cause of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

In today’s era where everything is possible with science and technology. It has been noticed that the single parenting trend is increasing that can have an effect on offspring’s growth.
This
essay will discuss some of the causes of
this
disturbing trend and examine possible consequences for the same.
To begin
with, the
first
and foremost reason is that
many
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working
father
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living in different cities or
country
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and because of that their baby has to be live with anyone
father
this
kind of situation is very common in today’s life. Another noteworthy reason
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such
things to arise is either of the partners wants to get separated and their juvenile
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to be chosen with whom they want to live in
this
both
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kind of situation the youngster get only love or support from
one
partner.
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, in kind of situation
kid
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can feel physical and mental disorders in the body.
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, in the medical experiment has taken on
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who have single
father
observed that the toddler felt some disorder as compared to the offspring who has
both
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. The development of
this
has been and will continue to be serious The
first
and foremost is a child can get only a chance to live with
one
parent they won’t be able to get the love of
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.
Moreover
, the juvenile is born and brought up with
one
parent and sometimes they felt mental and physical disorder because in society they see a child with
father
as result, they have so many questions in their mind that will directly affect on juvenile life and
also
in their educational performance .
For instance
, the London university survey on kid health says ,
those infant
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who lived with
both
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were mainly seen happy and good at study
in contrast
youth who lived with
one
parent often find it difficult to concentrate on study and do not get the happy feeling all the time. Another reason is that the behaviour is most stubborn, inexorable .and they are so demanding at the same time. To conclude, the single parent’s infant does not get the love and support of
both
partners and
secondly
, they feel mental pressure. The consequence of it which happen to be the adolescent who grows up with
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mother
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might be a stubborn offspring and
also
feel difficulty concentrating while studies.
This
needs to be carefully considered and watchfully monitored for its side effect to be kept under check.
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  • single-parent families
  • divorce rates
  • societal norms
  • economic independence
  • teen pregnancies
  • unplanned pregnancies
  • financial challenges
  • emotional and psychological effects
  • social development
  • behavioral problems
  • academic achievement
  • increased responsibilities
  • resilient
  • supportive environment
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