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Water resources around the world are failing deficient. Analyse the possible reasons and provide you suggestions

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In recent years, great attention has been paid to the topic of
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 sufficiency. The possible reason would be
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 wastage mainly from the industrial sector.
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 essay outlines the reasons and solutions to overcome
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 shortage problems in the world.
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,
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 truly believe there is a lack of awareness in our society to save
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 for our future generations.
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, manufacturing companies have evolved in almost every part of the world taking up most of the
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 supply for their own benefit. There is no proper recycling system created to prevent
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 wastage in huge amounts. Every child needs to be educated since young about the importance of
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 in our life and how we can save them. There are many ways to save
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, we can simply start by saving
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rain
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. Recycling
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rain
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 could reduce
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 wastage.
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, you could use the
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 for car washing and watering indoor plants, etc. We can possibly save a lot of
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 by practising
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rain
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water
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 harvesting, Introduction of
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water
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 harvesting will be huge benefits all of us including industrial sectors. In conclusion, creating awareness is the most possible and effective way to prevent
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 deficiency around the world .
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 is essential for
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 with no substitute. We should educate each other to prevent
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shortage
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 for upcoming generations.
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 is the most precious resource on earth. Save
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.
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