WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
In
this
society, natural gas and oil
are in short supply, therefore
, people
tend to invest money to search for more resources
. Instead
, many investments should be made in improving new power plants. To a certain degree, I partially concur with this
notion and that the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, owing to its' rapid increase in consumption of oil
, it becomes really hard for people
to find furthermore
to provide the
whole nation. Change preposition
for the
For instance
, rather than focusing on searching for the
scarce Correct article usage
apply
resources
that take ages, people
should consider using other providers such
as wind
turbines and solar generators. Furthermore
, wind
can never be in a shortage so it makes it much more
easier and convenient to rely on. Nowadays, some houses use Change the word
apply
the
abundant source like solar energy to supply electricity to the entire place. Correct article usage
apply
Consequently
, it's a waste of time and effort looking for scarce resources
as it
will eventually be gone on earth one day.
Correct pronoun usage
they
However
, it can also
be debated that oil
is the essential source of power that plays a major role in our daily lives. Without oil
, vehicles, for example
, automobiles and buses that massively rely on the former resource will be affected. Although
there are electric cars, they are extremely expensive in comparison to the
fuel-consumed cars. Other fossil fuels Correct article usage
apply
such
as wind
and solar are merely used by the population as it is expensive. In addition
, wind
is not always available and requires a forecast to know its speed and Add an article
the wind
also
for the
solar energy, Correct article usage
apply
sun
is only available in Add an article
the sun
daytime
so Add an article
the daytime
people
will definitely face difficulty during night
when using these Add an article
the night
resources
.
To sum up, every cases
have its own benefits and drawbacks. In Change to a singular noun
case
this
situation, the population can spent
equally Change the verb form
spend
be spent
for
both the Change preposition
on
oil
and development of other energy sources.Submitted by alinkarmyat0 on
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