WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In
this
society, natural gas and
oil
are in short supply,
therefore
,
people
tend to invest money to search for more
resources
.
Instead
, many investments should be made in improving new power plants. To a certain degree, I partially concur with
this
notion and that the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, owing to its' rapid increase in consumption of
oil
, it becomes really hard for
people
to find
furthermore
to provide
the
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whole nation.
For instance
, rather than focusing on searching for
the
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scarce
resources
that take ages,
people
should consider using other providers
such
as
wind
turbines and solar generators.
Furthermore
,
wind
can never be in a shortage so it makes it much
more
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easier and convenient to rely on. Nowadays, some houses use
the
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abundant source like solar energy to supply electricity to the entire place.
Consequently
, it's a waste of time and effort looking for scarce
resources
as
it
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will eventually be gone on earth one day.
However
, it can
also
be debated that
oil
is the essential source of power that plays a major role in our daily lives. Without
oil
, vehicles,
for example
, automobiles and buses that massively rely on the former resource will be affected.
Although
there are electric cars, they are extremely expensive in comparison to
the
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fuel-consumed cars. Other fossil fuels
such
as
wind
and solar are merely used by the population as it is expensive.
In addition
,
wind
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is not always available and requires a forecast to know its speed and
also
for
the
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solar energy,
sun
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the sun
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is only available in
daytime
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the daytime
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so
people
will definitely face difficulty during
night
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when using these
resources
. To sum up, every
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have its own benefits and drawbacks. In
this
situation, the population can
spent
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equally
for
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both the
oil
and development of other energy sources.
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