Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.

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most of us are thought in our childhood. Keeping our
house
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and workplace neat with the proper organization of
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is being considered an important practice and often encouraged.
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why it is vital to be organized, maintain neatness and how
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can improve one's life.
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, most of us face difficulty in finding the
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at our
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if everything is messy and not organized.
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week I had a meeting with an important client, and I got almost late
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the meeting for not finding my car keys. Most of us return home for finding peacefulness and if our
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is scattered with everything and not neat, it would make us feel more stressed rather than providing relaxation. Investing some time over the weekend for cleaning the
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and organizing
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can help us progress more productively and make our
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better
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place to enjoy and relax.
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most of us are already multi-tasking with hundreds of
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running across our
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. In
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sorted as it will save
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of time and energy.
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most of us work in open cabinets, with people coming over
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to have
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which is neat and
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all right places will not only create a good impression but will
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help you have everything handy paying attention to the discussion.
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organizing
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in advance before leaving office, will encourage our mind to start the
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day feeling more positive.
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handling home and workplace clean and being organized. As per my opinion, I definitely agree with
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of managing
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, workplace neat and organized as it provides more peacefulness and a better impression among others.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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