The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in the suburbs or in the countryside. To what extend you agree?

Traffic

congestion and transportation problems

are indeed burdens

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to metropolitan

areas

. One of the solutions

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been raised is that the residential zones should be moved to suburbs or rural

areas

, and I totally agree with

this

notion. The essay will provide relevant discussions to support the idea.

First

of all,

people

living in non-urban

areas

would commute less into the city for essential utilities, and

this

tendency could create a decrease in the

traffic

downtown.

In particular

,

suburbs

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residences would tend to use the facilities in their

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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for

time saving

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and convenience reasons.

Such

tendency lessens the capacity pressure for urban facilities and distribute the

courbanions

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carbanions

,

hence

decreases the

traffic

density to

inner

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city. One of the successful

evidence

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for

this

shift

is

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Singapore. Thanks to the suitable extension of facilities for suburban

areas

, the

traffic

jam surrounding mass convenience

areas

in

this

country has witnessed a reduction of 7% over the

last

decade. Non-urban residences

also

create another contribution to the reduction of urban

traffic

density as they are enthusiastic supporters

for

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public transportation. When

people

in rural

areas

commute a long distance to downtown, they would prefer public transport because of its affordability and convenience.

Consequently

, the number of personal vehicles is reduced in the city since more

people

travel by public transportation.

However

, it is notable that

such

scenario

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will only work well when the government develop an effective and dense mass transit. In conclusion, encouraging

people

to live in non-urban zones is one of the noteworthy ideas to solve the alert problem of

traffic

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a traffic

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jam

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as it could decrease the quantity of

traffic

off-road. Admittedly,

this

solution is effective only if the local infrastructure and facility meet the standard for residences.