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Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that ? Do you think job satisfaction is important?

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It is true that employers always looking for ways to improve employees productivity and subsidising healthy pursuits to increase output and services. In many developing countries
such
 as India,
job
satisfaction
 seems to be an impossible task. The reasons for
such
 including, work-
lifelife
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life life
life-life
balance
 and unsupportive management. I completely agree with the above statement that
job
satisfaction
 is becoming a luxurious thing but it is essential to retain good employees in an organisation. On the one hand, work-
lifelife
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life life
life-life
balance
 and a supportive boss is important to make an organisation environment less
stressed
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.
However
, in many developing countries, like India, it has been observed that employers main
goal
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goals
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 are only to increase productivity compared to a healthy workforce,
therefore
,
job
satisfaction
 seems to be an impossible task.
This
 is because, in these nations, the size of salary is considerably the key point rather than
job
satisfaction
.
Moreover
, because of less opportunity makes a person work in that workforce for his survival.
Thus
, these are the reasons which lead to less
job
satisfaction
 in the workforce.
On the other hand
, it might be said that if workers are fitter and less stressed, their working time will be more efficient, leading to higher levels of output and service.
Furthermore
, the work/life
balance
 of the staff will hopefully be improved
,
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 because their leisure time will be more fulfilling.
This
 may even be more motivating than pay increments, perks, or financial rewards
such
 as bonuses or incentives which may be hard to attain.
Finally
, feeling healthier may lead to a better
job
 the
satisfaction
 which is in itself a motivating factor. To conclude,
Satisfaction
 with the
job
, nowadays, become a dream factor when applicants find their career.
Although
 there are some companies whose goal is to maintain work-
lifelife
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life life
life-life
balance
 at the organisation
but
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the percentage is lower in developing nations.
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