Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many
people
argue that working in the same organization is a good idea but there is
also
a belief that working in divergent
organizations
is greater. The question is which environments are better? In my opinion, there are many benefits to having from working for different
organizations
.
To begin
with,
people
working in similar
organizations
usually achieve
stability
. According to
lots
of
people
, they said that when choosing a
job
,
stability
always comes
first
which means they don’t have to worry much about their future. They can take care of their family
lots
more but still have a particular salary and
moreover
, they can be experts at the field that they are working on, compared with having a
job
in different
companies
, you cannot be proficient at any field because you only
experience
it and do not tend to gain
stability
. ,
Also
the amount of money that you receive will fluctuate. Consider me, around 1 year, I have changed the various type of jobs,
this
problem will lead to the fact that I will be so exhausted because I don’t actually gain any particular amount of salaries on average year so that my life will be more unpredictable or struggled/ unsure because the amount of money that I get are fluctuate.
Nevertheless
, while
stability
is gained by working for one company, working for many
companies
will give
people
more
experience
in their careers. Experienced, for me, is really great things understand, what it means is that
first
of all, the feeling that when you work and find out from many
organizations
is so valuable because you can meet various kinds of
people
, experienced
lots
of working
style
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and
as a result
, you can fathom more about soft-skill and how to choose your suitable working environment. Let take my sister as a typical example, she is now 24 years old and has started working for 2 years, before she got the
job
as a Graphic designer she had experienced more than 20
companies
and achieved
lots
of experienced,
finally
after 1 year constantly change jobs she chose to work in a company call MDA because she realized that
this
company makes she pleasure and comfortable in working. She told me that the way that she was curious about each environment was so complicated. At
first
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she felt totally great with it but gradually the feeling has gone, but after she again wants to discover another. So it was so funny to involvement. What’s more is that I have known that before choosing a stable
job
, you should
experience
it early.
Experience
is a good thing to do
first
because you can understand the many diverse systems of those systems. In summary, I completely follow the idea that it is great to work in various
companies
because when you discover it
first
you can easily choose what your stable jobs are in the future.
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