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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land an in sea. What are the problems and solutions?

#species #activities #land #sea
These
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dayse
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days
, it seems that many species of
cretures
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creatures
 and
vegtables
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vegetables
 are in
dengerd
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danger
 of
extenction
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extinction
becuse
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because
 of humans activities
such
 as
illiegal
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illegal
 hunting and wasting
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trash
. In
this
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several
cause
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causes
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 associated with
this
 trend and some viable
remedis
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remedies
remedy
 would be mentioned. It is an
undenuable
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undeniable
 fact that peoples have negative effects on nature
speasally
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specially
especially
 on the extinction of creatures.
first
 of all,
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industrialization
 and
increase
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 in the population of individuals result in more
sourses
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sources
courses
 of
foods
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food
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 and
job
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. In fact,
this
phenomenone
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phenomenon
 empower to destroy
many
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 of
natures
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 land to provide
suitable
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a suitable
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 place for
agriculature
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agriculture
 and
bulding
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building
manufactuers
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manufacturers
. The more people destroy
environment
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the environment
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, the greater the chance of
animal
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animals
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 being
in
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 risk of
died
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.
seconedly
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secondly
, most
of
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people
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the people
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 do not understand the importance of
indengerd
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endangered
 animals and
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 habitats so they do not any temptation to save them.
Finally
, many
of
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tourist
attraction
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attractions
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 are in
dengerd
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danger
 of
destrouyed
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destroyed
 by tourist
such
 as Rife
coural
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coral
 in Newzland.
becuse
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because
 of many trash
releasied
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released
 in nature by visitors many types of fishes lives there for
millions
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 years are thrithend. In terms of solutions,
firstly
 ,governments should
introuduse
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introduce
 harsh lows for protecting environment
such
 as control the amount of waste
relased
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released
related
fron
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from
 manufactured to the rivers or planting trees after cut them for a new agricultural area and penalized illegal hunter seriously. A
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second
 remedy would be that, if individuals
be
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awareness
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aware
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 about
indengerd
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endangered
 animals and finding
hany
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any
 solution to protect them they
diffently
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directly
differently
 try to do it and it
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would
 be probable by running
campagin
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campaign
campaigns
 in the cities and teaching
childern
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children
 from early ages at school.
Finally
, tourist regulation should be changed to protect
environment
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the environment
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 by
restrict
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 visiting
such
 places with any people. In conclusion, humans
couses
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causes
 many problems lead to
thritend
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threatened
 animals and plant.
However
, there are some possible ways to tackle these problems.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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