You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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I am writing to express my interest in working for six months at our company's London headquarters. I believe there is a short-term training programme on cloud and machine learning technology, and I would be highly interested in participating in

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a programme. Attending

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training at head office would give me the kind of exposure that would enable me to make a meaningful contribution to our digital ambitions as a member of our digital centre of excellence team in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia.

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, working in the head office would allow me to connect with others and discover the most secure approach to deploy mobile applications in the public cloud. My current role as a site reliability engineer can be easily handled by my colleague Alekya. she is a multi-tasker. She would be happy to take on some extra responsibilities.

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, I can

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work remotely for London on migration projects that required my inputs.

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I do not see any hurdle to make

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plan works. I would be grateful if you assist me in arranging all levels of approval for my itinerary. Your swift cooperation is greatly appreciated. I will look forward to hearing from you.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

199 words

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