Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason some job are better done by men and others by women. do you agree or disagree?

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of male and female. I strongly disagree with

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could select a job and be successful in it by high attempt.

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not matter what is your

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employees are an asset to any industry and as our stereotypes

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always appropriate, we must not discourage anyone to opt an occupation because of his or her

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by working with another sex and more endeavour.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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