Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion?

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technology is affecting many areas of life, and how to spend leisure times are no exception. It is apparent that

children

and adolescents spend more time playing

computer

or video

games

than ever before, which may wary many parents. I completely agree with

this

statement, and in

this

essay, I will try to outline

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the detrimental effects

computer

games

have on youths. There are several adverse ramifications to consider.

Firstly

, playing

computer

games

makes

children

stop being active physically and encourages

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a sedentary

lifestyle

.

Instead

of participating in

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activities with other

children

, offsprings prefer instant gratification and thrills from playing these

games

, as it is effortless than kicking a football or go for a stroll.

Secondly

, unhealthy convenience food moves in tandem with

this

lifestyle

, which

further

exacerbates these negative effects.

Finally

, it has been suggested that they become indifferent to

surroundings

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and do not participate in family activities.

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some research

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shown that

computer

games

may lead to better spatial awareness and multitasking, the benefits do not

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by these shortcomings. More often than not,

computer

games

harbor

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violent materials, and the content may be loaded with different fast-paced animations, rampant violence and death scenes which may harm

children

's

further

intellectual development and maturity. They may even grow accustomed to these scenes thinking that what they are seeing is totally normal.

For instance

, a Danish study of young delinquents reported that adolescents who spent more time playing violent video

games

in their childhood

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were more inclined to a violent

lifestyle

later on. In summary,

computer

games

encourage

children

and teenagers to

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sedentary

lifestyle

and to the exposure

of

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violent content. I fully support the

propostion

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proposition

that

computer

games

have only a little value and more

harm

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effects.