Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.
In the recent
past
the public said that the world will become flexible and Add a comma
,past
ease
to live especially about the transportation, but Correct your spelling
easy
unfortunately
things been changed, yet the society went through something called "traffic jam". Through Add a comma
,unfortunately
this
essay, I will provide a
clear opinion regard Remove the article
apply
the
statement of Add the preposition
with the
this
trend, then
I will move
directly through the factors of this
impact and what are the main procedures to let the authority control the rush roads. Firstly
, I will begin with the statement and how truly
it is. Replace the word
true
First
of all, the traffic jam became the main tragedy
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tragic
reasons
that we are dealing with and it is uncontrollable, due to multiple factors Fix the agreement mistake
reason
such
as; unorganized roads, especially when they are driving down the roads, then
meet up with variety
of traffic Add an article
a variety
light
which will Fix the agreement mistake
lights
effect
their movement. Like what is happening in Correct your spelling
affect
kuwait
highways especially the fourth, as well as the fifth highway street, whenever you Change the capitalization
Kuwait
move
by using a vehicle you directly face a rush hour. Moreover
, tremendous construction ares
, Correct your spelling
areas
thus
extra parking lots are one of the elements to what we are dealing with in
these days which allow the community to become aggressive Change preposition
apply
although
crazy whenever they missed their arrangement or if they would like to move
from area
to another place. Correct pronoun usage
one area
That is
why the statement of this
impact is highly true and I can not deny it, became the reality of what we are facing in the
modern society. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, the only hope to
let Add a missing verb
is to
this
trend to
become Fix the infinitive
apply
benificially
efficient, yet less effective as know as "Harmless to the public". By Correct your spelling
beneficially
let
the authority contribute new plans Change the verb form
letting
for instance
; Monitoring the road map of the
any specified city by using Remove the article
apply
an
advanced technology by either drones or satellites, that will add a huge vision of how to rebuild useless road transitions, Remove the article
apply
also
to
eliminate unlicensed venues to add extra spots for the society to Fix the infinitive
apply
move
freely without facing barriers. Furthermore
, to provide discipline ways to encourage the local communities to use an alternative transportations
either Taxi, Buses, Correct the article-noun agreement
alternative transportation
elctric
scooters, Correct your spelling
electric
In
addition
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,addition
plublic
bus transportation. Through the Correct your spelling
public
above mentioned
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above-mentioned
ideas
it will involve through a phenomenal pace to the public and Add a comma
,ideas
to
prevent the green from pollution, yet to let them provoke in safety and happiness in their lives. To sum up, Change the verb form
apply
this
kind of tragedy will not get into quick results, because it takes a matter of time and budget to transform it, but being together and work as a team player will boost things up from their side, yet the government role to control it.Submitted by iissa1991 on
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