Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.

Recently, there is an ongoing debate whether it is important to get a good

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environment and pleasing

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and or to get a

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with good wages. I believe the way people’s thinking influences is somehow to consider their decisions for

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matter, especially their definitions in

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and satisfaction in the

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.

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essay, as my opinion leads to, will try to elaborate both views with some considerations as I agree that

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is better. Some

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people have a

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that

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can bring anything including

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. They have dreams to buy luxury goods

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as big houses, limited edition cars, updated gadgets or even to collect

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belongings like rare paintings, sculptures, and something like that, and through

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they will feel happy because their stratification in society increasing. These kinds of mindsets can lead to the acknowledgement that bigger payment jobs are better.

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, to think

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as the goal of life is not relevant in my point of view because enjoyment might not be bought by a piece of

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called dollars. Psychologists explained that if we think

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can afford anything, it will be a well-known agreement that the rich are the

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class gaining the happiest life, but in the fact, in some ways, tells dissimilar. The rich have more risks to get problems in their families, in educating their children, and other relating impacts which all of them are

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inevitable.

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mindset, the way of thinking that

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cannot afford

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, can be a locomotive for the believers for finding a

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is convenient to avoid the dire effects. They will look for the

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with appropriate tasks and deadlines and

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consider the environment of business even with a low standard of wages. With

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, they can get calmness and

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, they can save

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not to buy

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anti-stressed drugs as well as to get into excessive entertainment programs. To sum up, people consider

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as

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input for finding jobs and it will always be better to be a breadwinner in a

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that someone can find convenient in it.