Plastic containers have become more prevalent than ever. They are used in many businesses such as in the food and beverage sector. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays,
plastic
plays an important role in our daily lives. It has various applications, is long-lasting, and is low in cost. The profit of using elastic is countless, but its drawbacks should be seriously considered.
Firstly
, there is nothing to argue about the convenience of
plastic
products,
such
as containers, furniture, or even toys.
For instance
, we all wake up using
plastic
toothbrushes, eating breakfast in
plastic
wraps, writing with
plastic
pens, and sometimes having our dinner in microwave-safe
plastic
boxes. Most of them are very light, waterproof, can be washed and reused. One more huge advantage is very cheap, make it suitable for every household, and business, not only in the food and beverage industry but most shopping malls, bookstores are still using
plastic
bags for their products.
Secondly
, because it is inexpensive, it is hard to convince people to recycle it. We all have that lazy moment to wash an oily
plastic
box. It could be smelly too if we do not store it right. And the cost to reprocess is extremely high compared to the cost of production. 
Plastic
could destroy the environment badly due to its stability. A
plastic
bag could
last
for hundred years, makes wild animals mistaken it for food, and the cycle goes back to our bodies,
then
harm our health. In conclusion, the disadvantages of using
plastic
containers
has
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outweighed the benefits. Yet it is not a pleasant job to reuse
plastic
containers, we should pay attention to how we receive
it
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them
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.
For example
, you can bring your canvas bag to supermarkets and refuse to take
plastic
carriers, or bring your own tumbler to Starbucks can save 10% on your coffee.
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