Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

In the recent, past the public said that the world will become flexible and easy to live especially about
the
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transportation, but
unfortunately
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things been changed, yet
the
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society went through something called "traffic jam". Through
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essay, I will provide clear opinion regard
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statement of
this
trend,
then
I will
move
directly through the factors of
this
impact and what are the main procedures to let the authority control the rush roads.
Firstly
, I will begin with the statement and how true it is.
First
of all, the traffic jam became the main tragic reason that we are dealing with and it is uncontrollable, due to multiple factors
such
as; unorganized roads, especially when they are driving down the roads,
then
meet up with a variety of traffic lights which will affect their movement. Like what is happening in Kuwait highways especially the fourth, as well as the fifth highway street, whenever you
move
by using a vehicle you directly face a rush hour.
Moreover
, tremendous construction
ares
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areas
,
thus
extra parking lots are one of the elements to what we are dealing with
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these days which allow the community to become aggressive
although
crazy whenever they missed their arrangement or if they would like to
move
from one area to another place.
That is
why the statement of
this
impact is highly true and I can not deny it, became the reality of what we are facing in
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modern society.
Therefore
, the only hope is to let
this
trend
to
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become highly efficient, yet less effective as know as "Harmless to the public". By letting the authority contribute new plans
for instance
; Monitoring the road map of
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any specified city by using
an
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advanced technology by either drones or satellites, that will add a huge vision of how to rebuild useless road transitions,
also
to
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eliminate unlicensed venues to add extra spots for the society to
move
freely without facing barriers.
Furthermore
, to provide discipline ways to encourage the local communities to use alternative transportations either Taxi, Buses,
elctric
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electric
scooters, In, addition
plublic
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public
bus transportation. Through the
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ideas it will involve through a phenomenal pace to the public and prevent the green from pollution, yet to let them provoke in safety and happiness in their lives. To sum up,
this
kind of tragedy will not get into quick results, because it takes a matter of time and budget to transform it, but being together and work as a team player will boost things up from their side, yet the government role to control it.
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